TinSM
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Post by TinSM on Feb 10, 2003 23:37:33 GMT -5
First poem I ever wrote got published. Though I'd share this one. Funny, sent it out just once, to the New Yorker. It came back cut clean in half, by a paper cutter. A message, I'd say. First half is nails, second half, oh well. Pretty sure that was their point. (From pov of SF Bartender, which I've never been)
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For decades daily her dark hose under swinging doors became silk elbows on my hard oak unfocused on my single throw of her favorite handle.
Then whisked away to Chicago a commodities king installing her there
Time too many yesterdays brought her back where the bitter brass of a new golden focus flows dark stout all afternoon as bow-tie’s eye takes in crow’s feet framing saddening mug a crinkled mouth dousing sintered memories of towered-glass love and Harry my boss during Darrah’s third trip to the bathroom winks box-seat wager she’ll flip the switch on my Mr. Coffee in the morning.
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TinSM
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Post by TinSM on Feb 10, 2003 23:48:24 GMT -5
I like this one - in a sense could explain why I like the simplicity of Advantage over the complexity of Explorer. Seriously. I like to use my md'ing time to daydream, to figure things out - kind of a background process. I don't like to think think when I'm doing hobbies. Jim Dandy recently sent me an e-mail, in response to a question I had asked him, in which he said the Advantage was truly a fun machine compared to many others he'd used. I new exactly what he was saying. It is fun, no work except the digging, and that's the part I dig about dirtfishing. The digging. The mindless digging.
Dragon-Dude
Perhaps one day you shall share sear and lash of dragon’s tongue that menaces
Perhaps this day you shall allow me to share how we met his harness and yoke his favorite food how much water he needs how I ride him, Drive him
Searing lashing twisting looping menacing moons dreadful dreams come mornings over years concentration keen crazy timelessness four in the morn comes nine dark working taming the dastardly demon the bastard’s been with us some thirty and eight years
Best friend forever now, though that Dragon-dude Goes fishing with me unties the nasty knots Don’t have to think think Dragon-dude’s trained to do the pedestrian stuff now too
Ponder this: panthers are punks: pretty peepers peering leering, pretending perniciousness petty dream-ponies half your weight specious spears piercing sleep putatively
Dragons pooh pooh panthers
I really like him.
He is my favorite pet
He sleeps with me Insists on pillow-sharing Worst, he drools sometimes Arranges my cheek on wet spot But I don't mind He's a fun little rascal.
Sometimes we wake same time middle of the night
laughing at things just did saw heard said fantastic places visited
Some nights we go everywhere together places never seen couldn't discover without him
And when he shows me cool ways to make some dough Dragon dude dont make me share Keep it all, he says
And to think he used to make make me shudder sweat in darkness alone Now, long old tongue curled on lip concentrating like baseball pitcher deliverin’ nasty heat, Dragon-dude unties knots for me Claws close and twiddling While I sleep, or daydream at the ocean
Imagine that
I think he needs glasses
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TinSM
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Post by TinSM on Feb 10, 2003 23:55:27 GMT -5
Here's one about Internet communications that I've never shared. I kinda like it. Just some fun here, folks.
Gossamer Village
in shared caves then both home and village around fires like town squares, generations of jostling thumbs bred this tool spacing selves inward, tribeless strangers connect untouched, warmed bit by bit glowering cathodic fires cold desiccants isolated souls howl together alone and unheard in Gossamer Village
Ó 1999 by Thomas Rendall
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Doug in SJ
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Post by Doug in SJ on Feb 11, 2003 0:26:20 GMT -5
Congrats on getting published! Very nice work. I really liked the Gossamer Village piece.
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Ron (CA)
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Post by Ron (CA) on Feb 11, 2003 3:46:44 GMT -5
Kinda makes me feel like a 1st grader trying to read Shakespeare!
Congrats on getting published!
HH
Ron (CA)
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